Forbidden World

by Octavio Fuentes

Novelia Choice Award

"Forbidden World" is a captivating science fiction thriller that plunges readers into the perilous beauty of Viridis Prime, an alien planet that becomes both haven and potential doom for a group of young human colonists. When Mia Novak and her fellow adaptor students arrive on this lush but treacherous world, their final exam becomes a desperate fight for survival. As they struggle to build a settlement and unravel the mysteries of Viridis Prime's bizarre ecosystem, they discover that the planet itself may be more than it seems – and that they are not alone. This gripping tale combines the intensity of a survival story with the wonder of first contact, all set against the backdrop of a vividly realized alien world. As Mia and her companions face escalating threats from the environment, internal conflicts, and an approaching cosmic danger, they must adapt in ways they never imagined. "Forbidden World" explores themes of human resilience, the ethics of colonization, and the profound consequences of humanity's reach into the stars. With its blend of hard science fiction concepts, coming-of-age drama, and pulse-pounding action, this novel will appeal to fans of Adrian Tchaikovsky's "Children of Time" and Kim Stanley Robinson's Mars trilogy.

Categories

Romantic Sci-fi Teen

Book details & editions

Chapters: 20

First published: December 16, 2024

About the author

Octavio Fuentes

Octavio Fuentes

Most people look at you funny when you tell them you left a career as a travel photographer to write books, but honestly, it makes perfect sense to me. After two decades of capturing stories through a lens – everything from Oaxacan cooking traditions...

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The Final Test

Chapter 1: The Final Exam Awaits

Mia's eyes snapped open in the pre-dawn darkness, her heart already racing. The soft blue glow of her room's bio-monitors cast ethereal shadows across the engineering tools scattered on her desk. She'd barely slept, but that hardly mattered now. Today was the day - the final exam that would determine her future at the Space Academy.

Rolling onto her side, she watched the holographic rainforest that covered her walls, a personal touch that had earned her more than a few raised eyebrows from classmates. The projected leaves swayed in a non-existent breeze, and for a moment, she lost herself in their gentle movement. Even here, surrounded by cold metal and advanced technology, she'd found a way to keep nature close.

"Lights, forty percent," she commanded, pushing herself up. The room brightened gradually, revealing the meticulously packed survival gear laid out on her floor. She'd checked everything three times already, but her hands itched to verify it all again.

The standard-issue survival pack sat ready - water purifier, emergency beacon, basic medical supplies. Next to it lay her personal additions: a compact botanical scanner, modified to detect plant toxicity levels, and a set of bio-responsive tools she'd engineered herself. Professor Chen had called them innovative; her classmates had called them excessive.

A soft chime from her communicator broke through her inventory review. "Hey, you up?" Alex's message scrolled across her vision. "Of course you are."

She smiled despite her nerves. Alex knew her too well.

The corridors buzzed with nervous energy as Mia made her way to the main hall. Other students huddled in small groups, some reviewing last-minute notes, others trying to mask their anxiety with forced laughter. The air felt electric with anticipation.

"Mia!" Alex's voice cut through the chaos. He jogged up beside her, his dark curls disheveled as usual. "Thought I'd find you here early. Ready to ace this thing?"

Before she could respond, Jordan's commanding voice boomed across the hall. "Everyone, gather up! Pre-exam meeting in five minutes!" He stood tall near the central display, already drawing a crowd. His natural leadership always emerged in moments like these.

"Jordan taking charge again," Alex muttered, rolling his eyes. "Some things never change."

Lila appeared at Mia's other side, her expression characteristically focused. "Did you all see the updated equipment list? They added quantum stabilizers to the required gear. That suggests we might encounter temporal anomalies."

"Or they're just trying to throw us off," Alex suggested. "You know how they love their mind games."

Mia barely heard them, her attention caught by the massive screen dominating the far wall. It cycled through images of various planets - frozen wastelands, gas giants, and lush worlds that made her heart race with possibility.

The crowd grew as more students filed in, their nervous chatter filling the space. Jordan's voice cut through again, "Listen up, people! This is what we've trained for. Whatever they throw at us, we're ready."

Mia wasn't so sure. She'd excelled in all her classes, but something about this final exam felt different. The instructors had been unusually secretive about the details, and rumors had been flying for weeks.

The main doors slid open with a hydraulic hiss, and the room fell silent. Commander Hayes strode in, followed by a panel of senior instructors. Their expressions gave nothing away.

"Students," Hayes began, his voice filling the chamber, "today marks the culmination of your training at the Space Academy. Your final exam will test not just your knowledge and skills, but your ability to adapt, survive, and thrive in unknown conditions."

The massive screen behind him shifted to display a single planet - one Mia had never seen in any of their study materials. Its surface appeared to be mostly covered in dense vegetation, with occasional breaks of what might be water or clearings.

"Your mission is simple in concept, though challenging in execution. You will be transported to this planet in teams of four. Your objective: survive and establish a functional base of operations for thirty days."

Murmurs rippled through the crowd. Thirty days was longer than any previous survival exercise.

"Teams have been pre-assigned based on complementary skills and psychological profiles," Hayes continued. "When I call your name, move to your designated staging area."

Mia's pulse quickened as names were called out. She caught Alex's eye, silently hoping they'd be assigned together. Their previous collaborations had always been successful.

"Team Seven: Alexandra Chen, Jordan Matthews, Lila Patel, and Mia Santos."

Mia's breath caught. Working with Alex would be great, but Jordan? Their approaches to problem-solving couldn't be more different. And while Lila was brilliant with technology, her pragmatic nature often clashed with Mia's more intuitive methods.

They gathered at their assigned station, an awkward tension hanging between them. Jordan immediately took charge, "Alright, let's review our gear and establish a preliminary strategy."

"We should wait for the full mission brief," Lila countered, her fingers already dancing across her datapad. "There might be crucial details we need to consider."

Mia stayed quiet, studying the planet's image on the main screen. Something about it called to her, like it held secrets waiting to be discovered.

"Final preparations begin in thirty minutes," Hayes announced. "Use this time wisely. Remember, your actions on this mission will determine not just your individual futures, but potentially the future of human space exploration."

As the crowd dispersed into their teams, Mia's communicator vibrated against her wrist. The message that appeared made her blood run cold: "Not all is as it seems. Be prepared."

She glanced around, but everyone seemed focused on their own preparations. The message had no sender identification, and when she tried to trace it, the system showed no record of its existence.

"Everything okay?" Alex asked, noticing her distraction.

"Yeah," she lied, forcing a smile. "Just nervous about the exam."

But as they began their final preparations, the message kept repeating in her mind. Not all is as it seems. The planet's image loomed above them, beautiful and mysterious, and Mia couldn't shake the feeling that this exam would test them in ways none of them could predict.

The next thirty minutes passed in a blur of equipment checks and strategy discussions. Jordan insisted on establishing a clear chain of command, while Lila focused on technical specifications of their gear. Alex tried to keep the peace when tensions rose, but Mia found herself increasingly distracted by the anonymous message and the strange pull she felt toward their destination.

As the final countdown began, Mia took one last look around the familiar hall of the Space Academy. Whatever awaited them on that distant world, she knew their lives would never be the same after today. The exam wasn't just a test - it was a threshold, a gateway to something bigger than all of them.

And as the transport sequence initiated, bathing them in brilliant light, Mia couldn't help but wonder if they were truly prepared for what awaited them on the other side.

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