Prime Suspects

by Zara al-Mansour

When teacher Mr. Conway is found brutally murdered in a hidden room at Evermist High School, Detective Kinley is thrust into a web of secrets and lies. Several suspects emerge, each with their own motive: Penny, the underestimated student suddenly excelling; Lucas, the brilliant academic threatened with losing his crown; rebellious Jasmine, whose wild behavior hides deeper truths; the beautiful physics teacher Mrs. Hoffman with her gentle demeanor; Mr. Conway' eerily composed widow; and troublemaker Wesley, whose clashes with the victim were legendary. As Kinley peels back layers of deception, she discovers that in the hallways of Evermist High, everyone has something to hide—and someone was desperate enough to kill. The clock is ticking to solve a murder where the final lesson is revenge.

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Paranormal

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Chapters: 97

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Zara al-Mansour

Zara al-Mansour

CURRENT STATUS: Writing my fourth novel from a 24-hour café in Dubai Marina, fueled by too much Turkish coffee and the weird energy that hits at 3 AM. PREVIOUS PLOT TWISTS: Earned a PhD in CS (computer science, ofc) from Oxford while secretly w...

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A Fatal Interruption

"As we prepare to commence our semester examinations, I invite you all to take a moment of reflection according to your personal faith traditions," announced Mrs. Fletcher from the elevated platform. Her voice carried across Evermist High School's packed assembly hall where hundreds of students sat cross-legged on the polished floor. "May your efforts today yield the results you've worked for."

The principal bowed her head, her silver-framed glasses catching the light from overhead. The assembled students followed suit, the hall falling into reverent silence.

Mrs. Fletcher lifted her gaze after an appropriate pause, surveying the sea of uniformed teenagers before her. With a practiced smile that crinkled the corners of her eyes, she drew breath to continue. "I now officially declare—"

"EMERGENCY!" The thunderous cry shattered the ceremonial atmosphere.

Every head in the assembly hall whipped toward the side entrance where the shout had originated. The principal's words died on her lips as her smile vanished.

"EMERGENCY! PLEASE!" The voice grew more desperate as Mr. Novak, the school's longtime maintenance supervisor, burst through the door. His normally neat uniform was disheveled, and perspiration gleamed on his forehead.

A wave of murmurs rippled through the student body as Mrs. Fletcher strode purposefully toward the agitated staff member. The teachers exchanged concerned glances from their positions along the wall.

"Mr. Novak," Mrs. Fletcher addressed him with forced composure, though her knuckles had whitened around the microphone she still clutched. "What is the meaning of this interruption?"

The maintenance supervisor struggled to regulate his breathing. "I apologize for the disruption, Mrs. Fletcher, but this couldn't wait—"

"Please be direct," she cut him off, her patience visibly thinning.

Mr. Novak nodded rapidly, his eyes wide. "It's Mr. Conway. I found him in the exam security room. He's... he's dead, ma'am."

The controlled atmosphere of the hall dissolved instantly. Gasps erupted from students and faculty alike. Some students jumped to their feet while others covered their mouths in shock. The teachers clustered together, their expressions ranging from disbelief to horror.

Mrs. Fletcher's face drained of color, but she maintained her rigid posture. "Are you absolutely certain? This is not something to—"

"I wouldn't disrupt the examination assembly for anything less critical," Mr. Novak insisted, his voice steadying despite the gravity of his news. "I was checking the ventilation system as scheduled when I found him. There's no mistake."

The principal turned to face the increasingly chaotic hall. Students were already forming huddles, phones appearing in hands despite strict rules against them during assembly.

"SILENCE!" Mrs. Fletcher's command cut through the disorder like a knife. The hall fell quiet immediately, though the tension remained palpable. "Everyone will maintain composure. The examinations will proceed as scheduled. Your only concern should be the papers before you. Is that understood?"

"Yes, Mrs. Fletcher," came the unified, if somewhat shaky, response.

"Excellent. Return to your designated examination rooms in an orderly fashion. Faculty supervisors, please accompany your assigned groups."

The students rose and filed out with unusual solemnity, their whispers a constant undercurrent despite the principal's instructions. Once the last student had departed, Mrs. Fletcher turned to the remaining teachers.

"Mr. Harvey, please contact law enforcement immediately. The rest of you, proceed to your examination supervision posts. We cannot allow this tragedy to derail our students' academic progress."

As the teachers dispersed, Mrs. Fletcher gestured for Mr. Novak to lead the way. "Show me," she said simply.

They traversed the empty corridors briskly, their footsteps echoing against the linoleum. The security room was located in the administrative wing, deliberately positioned away from regular student traffic. Three years prior, an ambitious student had attempted to access examination materials stored there, hoping to secure the scholarship awarded to top performers. Since that incident, the room had been placed under constant supervision during examination periods.

Mr. Conway had been personally selected by Mrs. Fletcher to guard the room this semester. His reputation for unwavering integrity had made him the ideal candidate.

The door to the security room stood ajar. Mrs. Fletcher steeled herself before entering, but nothing could have prepared her for the scene inside.

Mr. Conway lay sprawled beside the central table where examination packets were neatly stacked. Dark crimson stained his light blue shirt, pooling beneath him on the tile floor. Multiple wounds were visible on his torso and neck, the violence of the attack unmistakable.

"Dear God," Mrs. Fletcher whispered, instinctively stepping back. Despite decades in education and countless crises managed, she had never confronted anything of this magnitude.

"I came to check the air conditioning vent," Mr. Novak explained, his voice hollow as he pointed to an open panel near the ceiling. "It's been malfunctioning, and with the exams today, I wanted to ensure the room stayed cool enough for the papers. That's when I found him."

Mrs. Fletcher nodded mechanically, unable to tear her eyes from her colleague's lifeless form. "Did you... did you touch anything?"

"Only the door handle. Once I saw him, I knew I needed to find you immediately."

The principal finally turned away from the grisly scene. "This will devastate our community. Evermist has never experienced anything like this."

Before Mr. Novak could respond, Mr. Harvey appeared in the doorway, his face ashen. He averted his eyes from the body.

"Police are on their way," he reported. "They've requested that we secure the area and ensure no one enters until they arrive."

"Thank you, Mr. Harvey," Mrs. Fletcher acknowledged. "Please return to examination supervision. Our students need stability now more than ever."

Mr. Harvey hesitated. "Are you certain we should continue with examinations under these circumstances?"

"Absolutely," she replied without hesitation. "Cancellation would only create more chaos. The students have prepared extensively, and disrupting the schedule would compound this tragedy with academic disappointment."

With a reluctant nod, Mr. Harvey departed, leaving Mrs. Fletcher and Mr. Novak alone with their grim discovery.

"Mr. Novak, you'll need to remain here as the initial witness," Mrs. Fletcher said, regaining her administrative composure. "The police will have questions about exactly what you observed."

"Of course," he agreed solemnly.

Mrs. Fletcher stepped into the hallway, needing a moment away from the sight of her murdered colleague. The implications were already forming in her mind—not just the personal tragedy of Mr. Conway' death, but the potential damage to Evermist's prestigious reputation. Parents selected this institution for its academic excellence and safety. This incident threatened both.

Mr. Harvey returned briefly to confirm the police were en route. "They've dispatched multiple units. They should arrive within minutes."

"Thank you for your efficiency," Mrs. Fletcher said. "How are the examinations proceeding?"

"As well as can be expected. The students are understandably distracted, but the proctors are maintaining order."

"Good. That's precisely what we need right now—normalcy and structure."

After Mr. Harvey departed again, Mrs. Fletcher remained in the corridor, mentally composing the statements she would need to make—to the police, to parents, to the school board, to the media. Each would require careful calibration.

Mr. Harvey had been assigned to supervise one of the senior examination rooms. Upon arrival, he distributed the test materials with methodical precision, though his hands trembled slightly.

"Focus on the questions before you," he instructed the students, who were still exchanging furtive glances and whispers. "Begin with the sections you find most approachable. Remember that academic dishonesty will result in immediate disqualification."

He paused, noting the distraction evident on their faces. "Regarding the incident mentioned earlier—that matter is being handled by the appropriate authorities. Your responsibility now is to demonstrate your academic preparation. Is that clear?"

"Yes, Mr. Harvey," the students responded in unison, though uncertainty lingered in their voices.

As the students bent over their examination papers, Mr. Harvey gazed out the window, wondering how a day meant for academic assessment had transformed into something so dark and unfathomable.

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